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Jessica ([personal profile] sparkysparky) wrote2006-07-15 08:58 pm

TEASER!: Harry/Ron NC-17 p0rn!

Title: p0rn!
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Dirty, annoymous sex in a dirty pub, blowjobs OMC
Notes:I know this isn't much, and it's just the beginning. Comments, concrit welcome! Enjoy! (More notes at the end!)



It had taken 3 years, 7 months and 6 days of quick gropes and shags in closets, or even quicker one-nighters for Harry Potter to finally reach one life-changing discovery: he loved sucking cock. He seriously loved it. He worshipped the feeling of a thick, hard cock, heavy with cum thrusting in and out of his mouth, its owner’s hands guiding his head in a rhythmic pattern, his only thought to please the man the cock belonged to. The bitter, viscous feel of cum in his mouth, sliding down his throat was a taste he had just admitted to himself he couldn’t get enough of.

He just wished he’d reached this decision someplace other than the rather grungy back room of an even dirtier Muggle pub. And that he wasn’t currently on his knees before an anonymous stranger, mouth wide open, accepting the controlling thrusts of the stranger’s cock in his mouth.

And he really wished he wasn’t as turned on as he was at the absolute wrongness of this situation.

“That’s it baby, suck my cock,” the man groaned, large hands tangled in Harry’s mop of hair, totally controlling the movement, the depth of the thrusts, everything. “You’re a pretty little slut, aren’t you?”

Harry groaned as the man sped up his thrusts. He fleetingly wished that the man’s harsh grunts and insults didn't make his cock twitch, but Harry felt it grow impossibly harder in his trousers. He opened his mouth wider, relaxed his throat and accepted the man’s cock deep in the back of his throat. Harry hollowed out his cheeks, and seriously set down to work.

After a few harsh thrusts, the stranger shuddered, spurting volumes of warm, thick cum into Harry’s mouth. Several sticky strands dripped around the softening cock. The man withdrew his cock from Harry’s lips, smacking it lightly against the side of Harry’s cheeks, allowing the last drops of cum to settle there.

Harry’s eyes were still closed and he swallowed slowly, wanting to savor the taste of the cum and the feel of it sliding down his throat. With trembling fingers, Harry wiped cum off his face, sucked it clean.

The man reached down, tugged Harry to his feet and tore the buttons on his trousers open.
“Look how hard you got for me, baby,” the man whispered, stroking a harsh hand violently over Harry’s erection.

Harry groaned and threw his head back. The man leaned down and bit the side of Harry’s neck, continuing the fast, hard strokes.

It only took a few seconds, and then Harry was whimpering as he came. The man held his hand up to Harry’s face, feeding him his own cum. Harry sucked at the man’s fingers, lapped the last traces of cum from his palm and leaned against the wall, panting.

The stranger stepped away from Harry, smirked at him. “Thanks, baby,” he said, and before he left, pressed a white business card into Harry’s hand. “Call me anytime, pretty slut.”

Harry closed his eyes until the man left, and then looked down at the business card in his hand. Hot tears slid down his face, a sick feeling of shame crawling down his spine.

When Harry left the pub, the card lay crumpled on the floor of the back room.

Notes: I've not written much pornish stuff (read it alot though!!), and this is my first ever blowjob fic. As I've never recieved (am obviously not male) and only performed once, I probably need pointers, so any and all are appreciated!!

[identity profile] whatitistoburn1.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 03:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my! I love slut!Harry! I think this was excellent for your first time [undoubtedly better than my first time, which wasn't too long ago]. Keep going, I wanna get to the Harry/Ron!

[identity profile] insaneboingo.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 04:28 am (UTC)(link)
Very Very nice ^_^

[identity profile] insipid-paragon.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
:O Holy crap, what a humdinger of a first bj fic. That was hot and delicious and you should give yourself a pat on the back! Nnnngh, dirty talk and slutty Harry means a good time for all!

[identity profile] songsheet.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 07:58 am (UTC)(link)
Jesus, this is EXACTLY what I needed after a night of debauchery and alcohol. THANK YOU. ♥

[identity profile] yaminokurisu.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
That was hot and porny... everything it should be!

Cannot WAIT for Ron's!Harry!Slut ♥

[identity profile] hope-h87.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
Nice :D
Can't for the Harry/Ron

[identity profile] compos-dementis.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 03:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my god.
That was hot in a sick way. It made me almost cry, that Harry would feel so ashamed about anonymous sex.
I can't wait for Ron to come and comfort him.

[identity profile] wolfiekins.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa! Talk about an amazing pr0n debut! Very well done! I really enjoyed Harry's thoughts on his epiphany...excellent! Nice touch with the other guy and his dirty talk...and all the lovely swallowing and licking...oops, sorry! Very hot, very grungy, very, um, stimulating!

Can't wait for the rest!

[identity profile] leeicons.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
good god that was brilliant. I just love slut!Harry. You must continue, it would be sin if you didn't.

[identity profile] flaminiag.livejournal.com 2006-07-16 08:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you hit it right on the head--(pun totally intended). It was hot, yet at the same time alittle off, but it captured Harry's shame for his turn-on.
I also can't wait for the H/R!

[identity profile] dearprongs.livejournal.com 2006-07-17 12:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Chop suey! Me want R/H. :3 Good job for your first time. <3

[identity profile] serena979.livejournal.com 2007-03-14 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!
*is hyperventalating so bad I can't spell it right* you better get in gear because I can't wait for the rest of the fic.
*is longing* Please hurry!!!!

[identity profile] serena979.livejournal.com 2007-03-14 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
oh yeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaah, btw I LOVE IT, as you can probaly tell from my last post. :) hurry hurry *waiting on tenderhooks*